In my room sometimes you can hear quite a lot of things but mostly its my siblings or music. People say their home is their castle to create the sense that their home is the place where theyre the king. There are also some capital letters that are in the wrong place. The sheets of my bed are blue black, white with a bit of gray for the frame of the bed. When you look around my room you can see a whole bunch of different things, if you climb above all the dirty clothes, theres all of my furniture, my radiator and a whole load of colours. It is a large room that comes out of the side but barely gets any sunlight and heat. I would also change the view. In my room I have a blue, round mat that my cat likes to sleep on. Emma's bedroom. It describes your room well. Because if you dont and try wade through all the clothes spread out and risk breaking your leg or ankle on toy cars or getting bits of lego stuck between your toes. My bedroom has 4 walls and in one large window on the south-west side. It is a square shape and it is warm. Looking at the wall-mounted shelves next to my bed you can see my reading lamp, my phone charger and a few books. I have a foam pillow, so my head just sinks in. The only way my room is brightened up is by having furniture with colour. Good work a nice peace of writing. My duchess is across from my bed flat against the left hand wall. 9 years ago. When I look out the window I also see the mountains and some time you can see car lights on the side of the mountain when it is dark. I have a window that covers the whole wall so you can see outside. When I left my room I had my pajamas on the floor with my beanbag in the middle of the room. Or, it might be used to express how dirty the home is. Your Bedroom Ideas are very elaborated and the descriptive part of it has been written very well. Your vocab was well done and I was able to visualize. If you walk into my room your senses would explode because of the smell, sight, sound, touch. in order to create the perfect metaphor to describe your home. The scary closet. Your description is really good. Spot on Dylan, explained your bedroom very well. My room is not too empty but its not too full either. You used good description and your story was interesting. My bed takes up about one quarter of my room and is stationed next to the northern wall of my room. On the top end there is two pillows and a bundle of pijamas. I usually put the feathered ones at the bottom and the cotton ones on the top. Room Metaphors and Similes. My bedroom is very tidy. Then the bedside table is nearly crammed in the top left hand corner. If you go into my room there is a path you have to follow between the mess if you want to navigate around my room. Great writing. My bedroom is in the south end of the hose and it faces southwest. It also has jumps for my motorbike but you cant really see them because they are covered over with grass since I dont go on them much anymore. I have shiny white wardrobes that are very large. He is a pig. Also I have light pink checked sheets. Beneath the mountain is a variety of my calves running in the evening sun. My room has a lot of sport contents. Everyone wants to have the perfect bedroom, the best way to do that is to make it your own. My bedroom is the second largest bedroom in my house, and in this description writing I will describe to you about my bedroom by my accessories, layout/space, color and furniture so here we go. Accessories, accessories are big in my room because I picked them personally and they were given to me as gifts but they are apart of my favorite things. I have told you four things about my room. Islas Bedroom Description Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM Metaphors are used by many people to help convey a more abstract concept. On one side of the room has a bunk bed where the bottom bunk is a double and the top is a single. please help! Another metaphor that could be used is, " The bedroom is so messy, it looks like a war zone." My bedroom is bright like the sun. What is walking dictionary a simile or a metaphor? What is a metaphor for a metaphor? A metaphor for a metaphor?! A1: there isn't such thing it is just called a metaphor. A2: Alfred Jarry called it a pataphor Yes it can be very messy and there are times I cannot stand that mess any more so I tidy it. Mollys Bedroom A cool breeze drifts in from an open door or window. You have some great ideas and I can get a really good visualisation of your room. Emma I like how consistent you are on your punctuation's It is good how you used them. I stroll into my room and the bright colours instantly pop out. Although I dont really like the blue on my walls and the colour of my floor so itd be good if that could have a change. I like the clear description, so it's easy to visualise. NSL: There were some comma's needed that were not there, and some starts of sentences that were not capitals. Hopefully we will get you some colour in your room soon. I wonder what you would change about it if you had the chance too? The accessories. I think you need to work on use of commas and apostrophes, some of them are not needed. The color of the carpet is a dark grey which goes with the furniture and the color of the walls. Its in the garage for the same reason, but on the other hand it does have a lot of space. Very well written. Even though my drawers, desk, bedside table, curtains and walls are all white. I hope you can imagine my very much loved bedroom in your mind as if you're there at my house. Now for all of the accessories in my room. Your mother or father might have taught you a lot of dishes to cook or given you a lot of games to play to help your brain. My bedroom is small but everything fits in it. To the right of my bed is my set of wood stained brown patterned drawers with my guitar up against them. It was a great story. Now I am going to move on to my senses. What is self fun? So overall i think my bedroom is a wonderful place to relax and do my own thing so I wouldn't change a thing about it. In my bedroom I have a big abstract photo of mountains hanging above my head. Good peace of writing. Although I could make a change as I would like a desk where I could do my work. My room is the best room in my house I think this because of the warmth and the softness in it, (mostly my bed) I would like to give you a tour about my queen size bed. Hannahs Bedroom You really described your bedroom and well use of words in your writing. I have two soft pillows filled with feathers and two cotton filled ones. Your vocabulary is really cool, but I think that you could have some more adjectives. I really liked that you used some really great words that have me hooked in. I have many wall decorations in my room ranging from many colours such as black, red, white, green, blue, pink and yellow. We're i can't use it when i'm in my bed! So my layout might be tight, but it works for me. Well I have a double bed that is really comfy and warm, a laundry basket that is full. Quite a few good words but a lot of bland words in your writing making it a bit boring. I have a modern wooden desk for school work. MY BEDROOM. I think you edited your writing well ,I could only find one spelling mistake! My bed it doesn't get made and the sheet is on the floor. My room has many accessories, there is pictures, paintings, plants and other things too. I like how much description is in your writing, mabey next time dont keep repeating your self, Use used I little bit of complex vocabulary but not a lot. like how you have used brackets. My bedroom is in the end garage with the laundry in it. This final piece of text will be explaining the lighting. My messy bed is on the far wall furthest away from the cream white door with an old wooden dresser at the end. Your spelling needs some tweaking but overall I think you've done really well :). They are happy to enjoy the predictable lives they have, rather than search for an exciting purpose in their existence. To the right in the hallway on the creaking floor is my bedroom. My room smells inviting, it's like strawberries mixed with flowers (which smells good). My theme, my theme of my room is based on a sporty kind of theme. Wispy, rancid, airy, musty, stale, fresh, putrid, faint, light, floral, and acrid are all adjectives that could pertain to smell. as your beautiful grey carpet is covered with clothes sometimes! My room is the smallest in the house but I love my room just the way it is. Most of the ideas are elaborated equally. 4+, Oh my goodness Jake! Its an old 50 inch Panasonic TV with a gray color scheme and a black outline and controls on the front. In the corner an old dark glory box to go with the old wooden jewelry box upon the set of draws. Under both of those beds there are fold out trundlers made for if i want more people in my room so in total i can have a staggering four people in my room! Because its too big to get out the door and it sits almost in front of my door and we cant get it out and I hate it. My bedroom. My carpet is a kinda light blue with dark blue lines through it and I also have my rug which has a black background and white zig zag lines on it. TROYS BEDROOM Shoes and clothes that I was too lazy to put back in draws in a bunch on the floor in front of it. My room has lots of colour in it. This was well edited, but to get even better look over and over. Accessories is definitely one of my favorite things to see in my room. Or, it is a metaphor that could be used if you have just cooked a big messy meal and turned around to see that there is flour and vegetable scraps and plates and bowls all over the counter. Some of your words are a little bit repeated. I love the way you have proven that your room is one of your favourite places. I get a feeling you're into sports and really like cosy spaces. You're spelling was really great, I don't think I found a single error. Feedback - Overall I quite liked your writing and it's not to detailed but it has some in there and the description you used was great. WILL HS BEDROOM On the wall is a black outlined photo frame with photos of me and my family and our holiday to Australia. Georges Bedroom And now the style of my bedroom and what I love about it. I need to make sure the cloths are not on my desk they need to be in my dresser or in my closet. My room is square shaped with a big floor to ceiling window (which is awesome because I can see the mountain I love to ski on so much) on the back wall with draping curtains. Right next to my bed is a little brown, wooden bedside table where I keep my phone, clock and other items. My bedroom supplies a marvellous view. The duvet is black and white patterned with vibrant orange sheets. You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. Now lets talk about the mess. For example, a child who loves to be out playing on the streets but needs to be indoors by 5pm might come home and say: Its a prison in here! If you go into My room you will probably think it's really big and very messy, and the first thing you will see is the pink wallpaper and the rips and sellotape on the walls. Feedback - It's good that you have the nouns and you have a bit of detail in them but add more. My bedroom has One build in wardrobe that has clothes towering out of it, a nice warm and comfy bed that usually is never made, One big window with an amazing view, A drawer with clothes stuffed inside, One bookshelf with books from when I was little and a big abstract mountain photo hanging above my bed. It's like a prison for books and random junk, and you never see it again until you decide to move your room around, which for me is usually every 3 years or so. Now you should have a pretty good idea of what my bedroom looks like. The layout of my room is made so everything can fit. My bedroom is a deep freeze. I have all my electronics are sitting next to my bed charging like my computer and my phone and ipad . They are covered in all kinds of hangings that make the room mine. I enter the room and dump my bulky school bags onto the ground. First I will explain senses then accessories and then layout and then to top it off the color of my bedroom, it is great. It is the most modern part of my entire house because it has recently been renovated from the garage that was never used. The first thing about the layout in my room you notice is the large curtains covering the windows at the back and at the left of my room. This is to say that one person (your mother, father, wife, husband) is the person who makes you feel most comfortable and relaxed. But you a lot of descriptive words. My desk is white with a long blue draw that matches my blue wall. My bed is in the corner of my room and is out of the way so you don't have to walk around it. (:? My bedroom is located at the back of my house halfway down the hall. My room was and old garage and now it is a room that has an olden day look, but still feels like a modern room. Dont sniff to much or else you will smell the dirty clothes on the floor. Very good vocabulary Sophie.I could imagine i was there. To call your home a dump is to say that its a complete mess! It is a king single and it has a wooden front and back board. Pictures and paintings would also make my room have a bit more zest. My bedroom, a place of comfort and rest. My desk is a white desk and is placed against the back of the room to give a feeling that the colors are spaced out. Alexs bedroom I have to balance on my chair and Sams shelf to reach my dictionary! My bedroom isn't that big so storage isn't easy for all of the clutter I have. Yes it definately is the best bedroom in the house and yes we are all jealous!!!! My bedroom (extended metaphor) My bedroom is a forest, heaps of clothes scattered on the floor is the undergroath. It is dominated by rubbish, food plates, cups and dirty clothes. Moving on from the layout of my bedroom to the layout of my walls. The biggest most horrifically untidy thing about my room is the floor. MY BEDROOM As you walk into my room you may notice the bright colours. At first I was a little surprised of the state of my bedroom, my wall decorations all still hanging up all except for one little photo. When you walk in my room you will see a white door and when you walk in the main area all the walls are white with dark furniture. Just below bed there are the studying tables for homework and other work. Well done. There's pictures everywhere, bright jewelry, and so many perfumes on my duchess. The room feels incredibly spacious because of the high ceilings, fitted with chandelier-like light fixtures The walls are not just straight and boring as they have little alcoves that are useful for tucking away furniture neatly. My desk Accessories are cool , funky and a little bit expensive but all of these different accessories just add to make my bed room mine. Next to my bed is a deyou miterfire. The windows have a great view out them and have stripey grey and silver curtains. The pattern is bad, It is a circle and 2 squiggly lines that run beside it and keep doing the same thing until it reaches the roof. Also I have bad eyesight so It Is really hard to see my tv from my bed. You used the right punctuation in the right places and I didn't see any mistakes. On my far side wall I have a bright red clipboard with flowers on it, on the clipboard I have many pictures of my family, friends and me. Nishmat Kol Chai In Russian, Honestly, its like DCs villain Two-Face; the fact on whether its tidy or messy is based of luck, like the flip of a coin. Remington 7600 Thumbhole Stock, I love my room just the way it is, I even love the modern color's. I have loads of different accessories in my bedroom. My mini drawers has three drawers on top of each other with the middle one being slightly longer than the others. When my siblings come in they make a lot of noise so they get sent to their own room. It has a stuffed toy pit on the other side of the room as you walk in and it has a shelf above it with more toys, piggy banks, my xbox that doesn't work, my books and other stuff. They also allow a lot of sunshine to come in, no matter what the season. The carpet packs a warm feel to the room as it completes it and gives it a nice finish. Very poor punctuation and vocabulary, sometimes it was very hard to follow what you where saying. I have a couple of lamps hidden around the room so when its dark it makes this cool effect. I have a double bed,white covers and matching pillows to my starry bed which is navy blue and white spots sprinkled all over It. Usually when I have to make space/ tidy my room I put stuff in the wrong place. I like how you used brackets and capital letters to make words stand out, Your Spelling is good Molly. 4-. When you walk into my bedroom you will see three different colours starting at the entrance and going all the way through the room. Although there are many flaws in my room, Im still tolerating them. Well in my bedroom I have blue and white walls. laptop cables are Get your answers by asking now. JAMES BEDROOM You could improve on adding more ideas and making them a bit more interesting. Above my desk there is my mini basketball hoop with my mini basketball in it. Jessie T Usher Related To Raymond Usher, The best metaphors come from the heart. 5. Above my bed are decorations and then across from my bed there is my creamy white set of draws. Its a room I am proud to call my own. My rooms walls are two different colours. The chook shed is made out of corrugated iron. Right in front of you as you walk in is my blue patterned desk with my small, white basketball hoop hanging above. You spelt it as color (the American way). With the pastel colours and gold coloured curtains, it gives the room a lot of light. Lastly the furniture, I have three desks I don't know why, but I do. The reader doesn't know what you mean, but overall its very good. Next to my bed is a cabinet and some draws next to that. your paragraphs were formed well. It has a dark theme and it has black sheets and gray covers. You have accurately described the chaos that is your room - however you didn't mention how many times a week I ask you and your brother to tidy the mess up! My pillow is softer than a cloud and feels like a giant marshmallow. A normal room for a 13 year old. I have heaps of ski gear but I dont really have anywhere to put it so even if I do clean my room, my ski gear normally stays on the floor. Personally Im happy with my bedroom, the only problem is that it isnt done. There is a famous song with the line Home is wherever Im with you. My bedroom has the air of a miniature museum; the amount of photographs, posters and ornaments is quite daunting, as though it is difficult to decide what to examine first! R5. A strange smell like no other. Here, were creating a metaphor by saying a person is our home. Most objects in my room have the same color either black, grey or white. My white covered double bed sits in the middle of my spacious room. My Bedroom Sometimes in the mornings it can be really cold but when that heat pump goes on it makes it better. Use adjectives. A metaphor is a figure of speech that describes an object or action in a way that Lastly how it looks. Grade rating 4, your editing was really really good i could not see anything misspell or no comma or anything so well well done. My bed is really messy, it would be rare to see it made. Under my bed I throw just about everything down there like sport gear and clothes I can't be bothered putting away. The ideas are great and relevant to the topic. I like the vocabulary you used to describe your story like vibrant, large, silk, chilled. There are special items in my bedroom that cost a lot of money and one of those accessories are my Hats . In the left corner when you walk in is a stack of books, a few being written in swedish. Brothers Of A Feather Driving Wheel Lyrics, They are also quite long and the spelling is really good. (As you can probably tell I absolutely love call of duty). Nicely described George, your room is currently a blank canvas so you can do a lot with it. 8. as rough as a cob. I my room there is lots of colours all around it. It might not be your typical 13 year old bedroom because it's a spare room. The cushions on my bed are very soft and have a sponge texture. Inside that drawer is where I hold more of my goods and books. The theme of my bedroom is black, white, blue and grey. But some of the stuff in my room is going to sold so I can make more space. I think its very organised also it makes it feel spacious. If you walk into my room and look to the left you will see my bed and bedside cabinet, look to the far left corner and you will see my drums, then look to the far right corner is my dresser with all my old toys on top, and some lego technic then beside that is my desk/bookshelf and if you glance at the floor you will see the mess. As an Amazon Associate I Earn from Qualifying Purchases. My bed, My bed is a single bed it is in my opinion very noisy but also very comfy. My room is upstairs so as soon as you walk up the stairs you are in my room. Being next to it gives me a warm feeling. Which one of them is a basketball poster and on that wall, I have a light to look over my cabinet in the corner of my room to brighten it up. Some of the punctuation was a little muddled some of the I's were not where they needed to be and in between the full stops and the next sentence there were no spaces. The darkness at specific times, so as I said it can get dark fast, I have to use my lighting module just to make it look like its still daylight, it gets annoying sometimes, you just got home and you go in your room and you cant find the light (By the way my hallway light is a sensor light). Then your eyes are carried to my dark coloured wooden dresser underneath the back window to the left. I also have bright dots that include the colours of light and bright pink, a turquoise dark and light and yellow. My bedroom is facing west and is on the far side of the house. And now for the couch The one thing I hate about my room and cant get rid of it. DVD, TV) and add comas in some places. The style of your room to me is a dark and bright theme with all the colours and design. William I liked your descriptive words and the structure of your paragraphs. There's flower patterns everywhere and unique designs on my furniture. Above my bed, facing a window on the opposite side of the room, is a TV. great work i love that you did good punctuation and it was a good story. The creamy brown carpet is pleasant. Personally I love my bedroom. Your mother might say this if they come home and see that youve left all your toys lying out. The space of my room is quite small, but if you take out my draws it's a massive space. Youll find that my beds always made in the morning, and the clothes arent all scattered across the floor unlike the rest of my family. If you are 13 years old when were you born? Sometimes when it's really cold i'll have my soft red blanket as well. so I was a bit confused. One the style two how clean it is three my senses and finally my furniture. You've likely heard many primary metaphors throughout the course of your life and studies. Great writing. When did organ music become associated with baseball? In my room I have my school bags. Usually before I go to bed there is a glass of water and the book Im reading. I like the feel, the carpet, my bed and the size of it. The final part of the room is the space, the space of the room is kinda small which is a good thing because that mean that I can do cool ping pong trick shots. On the right hand side as you walk in there is an orange feature wall with a small white window towards the top. So my bed is messy, but in general my room isnt all that messy. . We cannot afford to heat our house in the winter. ALYSSAS BEDROOM It is literally a big, black dust nursery because its elevated to nearly touching the roof and Im short. So, you can use this metaphor! My bed sits in the very middle of the room, while my large dresser, containing all of my clothes, is tucked in beside it. So let's explore the den people called my room. All together I love my room because it is how I want it, its layout is how i want it, its smells okay,the accessories are good, and the theme is perfect. I have small colorful dots (pink,green,yellow,blue), turquoise blue love hearts and my name stuck to my shiny white wardrobe. When you walk in you will see my bed, cupboard, desk, drawers and my bed side table. Furniture is one of the biggest features of the room. The room has a big space to go around in and has the hobbies I like.but best of all is to spend time with yourself and always relax after a long day. You have made a great job of describing your room and I liked honesty with regards to your (constantly) unmade bed. Beside that there is my mini bookcase that is full of unread books, over from that there is my wardrobe full of junk and extra clothes. The furniture in my room is rather basic. Finally is my headset it is a turtlebeach recon 60P with a black base and a cool funky design on the base. The second style of my room is boys simply because its a boys only room for me and Jackson to share. My bedroom is a forest, heaps of clothes scattered on the floor is the So overall your writing is amazing. At the end of the expedition we leave a wonderful place and head back into the real world. When you walk into my room you can tell it is mine because my name is on my wardrobe door and my room is the only room in the house that has a blue wall. The floor is usually covered in clothes and rubbish. I have to admit though mum doesn't like the amount of time I spend in it. This was very well edited so there is not to much to say you have done a very good job with very little mistakes. Often, home is the place where we feel safest. The style of my room is very rustic and original. You could work on the adjectives but otherwise very good. Great detail in your paragraphs Jessie. My PS4 is tall and black with a blue light going across it and it has a futuristic look to it. I spend probably 12 hours a day on my bed so it needs to be nice and comfy luckily it is. Its mine and I like it the way it is. In my room we have really ugly wall paper, it is green and white, but ugly green. Around the neck itself I keep my karate belts, white, orange, yellow and purple. But all my room is really for is sleeping and playing Xbox. Another piece of furniture I haven't yet mentioned is my bookshelf. I like my room because it's got enough space for all my stuff like my table for doing homework and my spare bed for if I have any friends come over. Look at the picture and make sentences to describe the bedroom. On the other side of my bed, sits the divider that holds all of my well-loved books and DVDs. As you walk into my room, the first things that you will see is my bed. You could visualize your whole room.The furniture paragraph is very good. My parents make me keep it tidy for good habits. I also enjoy the way that my room is positioned and how it looks (when it's tidy). 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